Are you aware of George Polya’s guide to writing mathematics where he stated
“The first rule of style is to have some to say, and the second rule of style is if you are lucky enough to have two things to say, don’t try to say them both at the same time”.
I also wish to thank you for your “Discipline of Finishing” TED talk, it helped me get back on the horse after Digital Distraction nearly made me into a basket case. Your very practical advice is brought home by your wisdom and passion. I say this as a man of nigh 67. You are doing holy work, providing a bridge back from web and device driven distraction.
Sincerely yours, MW
P.S. If you are ever in SV and would like a home cooked meal, give me a call.